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Deviation Actions

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Published: Dec 18, 2004

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Literature Text

I look into your eyes
    a crack forms
You embrace me
    a brick shatters
A soft kiss
    like dynamite
Caress
    opens the way
You
    broke down my wall

I don't know.. I wrote it at work.

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I really love the way you wrote this one. My favourite lines are five and six. It's just so...so...nice? Awesome job as always Kim.